Fri Jan 11 2008 - Versification On A Friday
Versification On A Friday

Girl's Night Out



The crescent moon
Holds a pearl gray ball
With the promise
Of more splendiferous jewels to follow.

She cradles once more
Her new cycle of light
And rejoices
That her exile was brief.

I saw her last night
Lifting her darkling pearl
Towards Venus
As if to show off her renewed power.

They descended together
Toward the horizon.
I wonder
What secrets they had exchanged by midnight.

Comments (4)

Pragmatist (Legacy)
I love your poetry. Do you have it collected in one place?


Bless
404Error (Legacy)
That's beautiful!

Might I be so bold as to suggest an alternate title: Luna and Venus? Or perhaps Girl's Night Out with Luna and Venus, or Luna and Venus: A Girl's Night Out... or... Sorry, I got carried away.
mamallama (Legacy)
Lovely.
You really have a way with words, my dear.
Hugs, Tiggs
InStitches (Legacy)
How shall I ever look at the new moon again and not wonder about secrets whispered in the night sky?

 
 
 
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