Wed Jan 08 2003 - Coming of Age
Coming of Age





Coming of Age


 


Coming of Age



 


I am on the brink of becoming truly fine.



Like a bottle of wine


forgotten in some dark cellar,


by subtle shift in chemistry


and mysterious balance of elements,


without fanfare or witness,


turning the corner from ordinary to greatness.



I wonder if some wiseman will notice ?


His eye must needs be keen,


to recognize such quality


through a glass darkly.



But great will be his reward,


if he has the vision,


if he has the courage,


to coax this genie out of her bottle !




Comments (3)

Chaya (Unauthenticated) (Legacy)
I betcha I know one genius who can coax that genie out of her bottle. Or maybe even join her.

Heh!
RealmOfRachel (Legacy)
Really like this, especially the parts about chemistry subtly altered and the line about 'through a glass darkly'. You make poetry seem so effortless! In answer to your question I despised the English Patient!- Too many hours of nothing to look at but sand and nothing to listen to but whiny upperclass Brits cheating on their spouses. I think my tutor was sent off by the cloven hoofed one without a hug, or has possibly been smoking an illicit substance with Robert Downey Jnr to come up with this assignment.

Anyway thanks for the support will keep you posted...
bookworm (Legacy)
This was great, is it your own? Have you read the novel Blackberry Wine by Joanna Harris? It's narrated by a bottle of wine. ;-)
 
 
 
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