franny
bananafish

be my IV
Thu Oct 18 2001

steady flow of half and half i'm in need of dextrose, of electrolytes.
hook me to your happy, your steadiness, your infectious laugh.

i've been running low on fuel, this rocketship needs to land. i find myself floating in darkness, my shirt's disheveled, i'm vacuum packed...

and maybe all these mishaps, of missing busses and trains and classes, of wondering if homer will finally blow us up...of slipping on jelly donuts, their guts laid out in clumps, or watching the doggy poo on the ever ambitious ant...

maybe it'll all wash clean, and come out springtime fresh...corners starched with a purpose, to hide my IV drip...

how i want to rest in the folds of your muscles, in your clean bright glistening...how i want to wrestle, strike up a body conversation, respond with
make believe language, o's and ah's and yes...

hook me to a lifeline, play me a sadsong mandolin, Bella's song is flying through Italian air...through the galaxy...

with one quick prick, and tape around the hub, please make love with my catheter, let me drink your sweet juice...

11 Comments
  • From:
    Monstergirl (Legacy)
    On:
    Thu Oct 18 2001
    lol@doggy poo on ambitious ant.....

    but where you really got me was:

    please make love with my catheter, let me drink your sweet juice...

    I'M SPEECHLESS!

    franny........you've got the gift to 'write'!!
    thanks for sharing.
    ; )
  • From:
    Slipperman (Legacy)
    On:
    Thu Oct 18 2001
    wow. what gigeresque imagery.
  • From:
    DaffyDuck (Legacy)
    On:
    Thu Oct 18 2001
    :-O = Whoa!
  • From:
    Moonman (Legacy)
    On:
    Thu Oct 18 2001
    i'm aroused and revolted...if my wife ever comes to her senses and leaves me...i'll be on the first bus to frannyville.

    P.S. i can't say this enough...you write amazingly well.
  • From:
    Franny (Legacy)
    On:
    Thu Oct 18 2001
    hey slipperman! lord, i had to look up what gigeresque meant! :-)
  • From:
    Franny (Legacy)
    On:
    Thu Oct 18 2001
    holy epistaxis!!!
    yeow!
  • From:
    Franny (Legacy)
    On:
    Thu Oct 18 2001
    dammit Moonman, i think i find this revolting too! i'm having visions of Sting in Brimstone & Treacle...
  • From:
    Salamander (Legacy)
    On:
    Thu Oct 18 2001
    NOW she sees the light!

    I grinning because it pinches the tear ducts shut and keeps me from making a fool of myself in a public place.
  • From:
    Lilith (Legacy)
    On:
    Fri Oct 19 2001
    *wipe sweat from brow*

    That was hot! I feel a caramel melt down coming on, quick prick and all.

    =)
  • From:
    DaffyDuck (Legacy)
    On:
    Fri Oct 19 2001
    ROFL LMAO@Lilith!
  • From:
    Sezrah (Legacy)
    On:
    Sat Oct 20 2001
    wow
    sensual artistry